Hey, I forgot to tell you what a superb job you did of describing Eric's feelings of self abasement, as well as Julie's absolute enjoyment of his humiliation. Poor guy, even calling his sister in hopes of her intervantion turned abruptly south for him, It's almost as if Rachel had been sitting in her office chatting about the whole episode. I can't wait until Samantha shows up for dinner. Let the emasculation continue!

Just found and read it on Literotica. And thanks fo .r the tip about the Big Closet displaying posts the quickest

I wish this story would be a big book of about 100 000 pages. Lol, I never get tired reading. All the aspects of the sub/domme life are covered well with extremely good writing on the feelings of the characters. This story is encouraging me to write my own short stories. Its so good. Bravo Lady, Bravo!!!

Thank you. I'll be posting chapter 11 tonight. Should hit Big Closet in a couple hours and FictionMania and Literotica over the next couple days. Chapter 12 will follow shortly as well.

Yay....the happiest day of the week. Thanks for all Your time for this chapter :D

Chapter 10 is uploaded! I've been using three story sites for "Reversals". A couple of them normally take some days for the uploaded story to be made available. One of the sites makes the story available immediately. If you're eager to read chapter 10 you can find it here: Reversals Ch10

Finally some good news to share, chapter 10 is finished and ready for posting. I'll be uploading it today! Also, more good news, chapters 11 and 12 will be posted as soon as tomorrow! Turns out, I was really struggling to finish three chapters, not one. Julia and Samantha were somewhat pulling me through certain events. By the time I finally got there it was fairly clear I really had three chapters, not one. Sorry for the long wait. Hopefully, you'll find it worth it.

You've got to make a living. You know, I have just abandoned stories for no other reason than because I got tired of writing them, so I am just gratful that you even want to continue this one! Take your sweet time. Lady!

I'm sure the wait will be worth it. I love this story...

I can't even describe how soul draining my office job is these days. There are days I just want to resign and start writing full-time. I think I could eventually make a go of it. It's being broke in the meantime that concerns me. Honestly, the last couple days I had to put in overtime to meet a deadline that's basically nonsense. After finally getting home it takes hours for my writer's brain to come back into focus. I was actually writing a steamy scene with Julia when your post hit the board. I'm tempted, at times, to post small portions of the draft here just to give my readers a taste. I owe all you guys more actually but I don't want to ruin the story for anybody. I need to find ways past the nonsense. Anyway, back to writing. Big meeting tomorrow that's going to waste most of my afternoon tomorrow. :(

I feel like I've got "Rachel's Bitch" tatooed on my lower back....

Wish you all the best to have a quality chapter soon :) Thanks

I'm hoping only a few days. Sorry it's taking so long. My evil corporate job is getting in the way of my writing as are other things in my personal life. Just been very hard to finish the chapter. It's also a fairly long chapter so its a fair amount of work. Also, I thought I had the second draft knocked out weeks ago but Julia and Samantha told me otherwise so I've had to do a rewrite on portions of it. They thought Eric was getting off too easy and the ladies had a lot more to say to Eric. Emily, his sister, also makes an appearance for that matter. So, I beg some indulgence. Although I've written a number of short stories (none of which I've shared with the world via the Net as yet) 'Reversals' is my first novel. It is challenging me a bit. I hope to be able to write much faster as time goes on. If things work out, perhaps some day I can quit my corporate job and really get to writing full-time. This is just the very beginning for me.