Any of you boys interested in getting small? Really small? I'm trying to decide if this is an interesting genre for me to write in. I rather like the idea of shrinking a man down to the size of a toy. How about you?
Here's a sample of something I was playing with, let me know what you think.
I walked into the quantum chamber slowly, staring at the far wall, taken by the sheer size of the chamber and then the chill of the air on my naked body. My stomach churned with some uneasiness, feeling foolish by how much I'd let my fantasy take hold of me, at how small I'd pushed April to make me. We just had to have enough days to get me back to normal or, at least, something more man sized. Worst case, I'd even be satisfied with something the size of a small woman if it came to that.
I spun around as the sliding glass panel on the chamber began to close behind me. Eye level, April's enormous knee came into view, both her legs the size of large tree trunks at my size, the hem of her skirt looking more like a huge auditorium curtain dancing around her thighs.
Tilting my head back, looking up, something I'd grown accustomed to doing since the successive reductions, brought her face into view far above me. God, why did I keep insisting on more reductions?! I was little more than the size of an infant next to her!
"I'm afraid we have a little problem," April said, grinning at the obvious pun.
I grinned sheepishly. "I know. You don't need to make jokes. I was stupid to keep asking for more reductions. It's going to take weeks to restore me back to normal.."
She nodded, arching her eyebrows way above me, acknowledging the truth of the situation. "Yeah, it would," she said. "And that's the little problem. See, I've decided to make you even smaller."
My heart dropped in my chest, skipping a beat as I stared at the enormous woman, the giantess, on the other side of the glass.
She smiled wickedly at me. "As small as possible with the time left," she added.
"What?!" I yelled back at her.
"There's really nothing you can do about it either," she said.
Rachel, hope by now you have settled down in your new position where you get more time and are unburdened of your work pressure.You have a wonderful imaginative mind and the more time you have to think the more interesting and thought provoking material you would pen. All the best
Would wait Rachel..you have an excellent style of writing and an imaginative mind.. worth waiting for
I know, I've been totally terrible. I admit it. See my blog for an update on my time problems. I'm hoping I can get more "pen time" in soonest and become a real writer (or at least one practicing her craft on a daily basis.) I do want to write a gientess story someday though. The things I'd love to do... ;)
Really. No sense having two stories running that you don't have time to work on.
Its really an interesting thought. A woman can dominate by sheer size .Now April has him so reduced that she can physically control him easily. A world with puny men and tall big women..interesting..love the idea. Rachel,at the same time waiting for Reversals ch. 16
An interesting premise, Rachel; I'd be keen to discover what April's motives are.
I know what you mean. I have sometimes found it necessary to use a summarization to sort of jump ahead in a story rather than write out the "he said, She said" and the play by play. That can also let the reader's imagination come into play.
I really do want to finish "Reversals". It does have top priority in my writing. But, I'll admit, it is tempting sometimes to want to scribble out a short story or do a quick scene like the one above. Promise, I won't spend too much time on other projects right now though. In fact, I'm working on "Reversals" today, right now actually. Really trying to finish off the first draft of chapter 10. Julia and Samantha are a problem though. The ladies are enjoying themselves far too much at Eric's expense and it's taking so much time to get it all down! ;)
But let's wait until "Reversals"is finished, eh?
Good to hear ;)
So far,so good.